Mysterydawg has been kind enough to post a debut flash of mine. This is a great site and I hope everyone goes over, signs up and supports the e-zine. Other contributions for this week are from the talents of James C. Clar, Keith Rawson, and Barry Baldwin.
Congrats! Nice entry. What's going to happen to that guy?
ReplyDeleteNow that's what I call a "vintage" hardboiled read!
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Chris, Thanks. I'll let you decide.
ReplyDeleteAugust, That's what I was going for. I love the old stuff and the direct approach.
Interesting.
ReplyDeleteLike you came out of nowhere, started in the middle of a thought, then left the person dangling as you disappeared back into the night.
Interesting indeed.
thank you for that; now, i'm hyped!
ReplyDeleteawesome man!
ReplyDeleteThanks everybody. I appreciate the kind words.
ReplyDeleteThat second to last line cracked me up. An excellent slice of hardboiled. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteA most excellent flash, David!
ReplyDeleteCongrats! I'll go check it out.
ReplyDeleteGracias Mr. R.
ReplyDeleteSandra, coming from you, as someone whose work I've followed and admired, that means a lot. Thank you.
Charles, thanks. I hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteGood piece. I'd pick the movie star myself.
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece of writing! Kept me tuned right in.
ReplyDeleteNever before have I read such musings (a la G.I.) in the dramatic seconds before a showdown! Poor Mrs. H- not judged as a mere double-bagger, but, potentially, a death-bedder.
ReplyDeleteClare, Now that's funny!
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