Mysterydawg has been kind enough to post a debut flash of mine. This is a great site and I hope everyone goes over, signs up and supports the e-zine. Other contributions for this week are from the talents of James C. Clar, Keith Rawson, and Barry Baldwin.
16 comments:
Congrats! Nice entry. What's going to happen to that guy?
Now that's what I call a "vintage" hardboiled read!
Good job!
Chris, Thanks. I'll let you decide.
August, That's what I was going for. I love the old stuff and the direct approach.
Interesting.
Like you came out of nowhere, started in the middle of a thought, then left the person dangling as you disappeared back into the night.
Interesting indeed.
thank you for that; now, i'm hyped!
awesome man!
Thanks everybody. I appreciate the kind words.
That second to last line cracked me up. An excellent slice of hardboiled. Congrats!
A most excellent flash, David!
Congrats! I'll go check it out.
Gracias Mr. R.
Sandra, coming from you, as someone whose work I've followed and admired, that means a lot. Thank you.
Charles, thanks. I hope you like it.
Good piece. I'd pick the movie star myself.
Wonderful piece of writing! Kept me tuned right in.
Never before have I read such musings (a la G.I.) in the dramatic seconds before a showdown! Poor Mrs. H- not judged as a mere double-bagger, but, potentially, a death-bedder.
Clare, Now that's funny!
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